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Nice, but not more

I have a few comments on the song, first of all, the song stays to calm in my opinion, nowhere it goes really upbeat, only the instruments get harder, and to be honest, where the whole songs volume goes up the cymbals are pretty anoying, and the melody that comes after that, It's a pretty standard thing to use, same goes for the solo, try to use more Musical scales in the solo.
For the rest, pretty nice song. Just giving you some critics to build on to improve future work, don't consider this bashing on your stuff ;)

Owyeah, the melody u use sounds a little bit like the singing melody from Still Waiting, from Sum 41.

Farmin responds:

I knew someone would find the cymbals annoying :D
I personally really like the constant noise it gives off but i knew it'd be annoying.
It is pretty standard and i didn't realize it sounded similar to still waiting but thanks for pointing that out.
I'm not much when it comes to solo's, I've always wanted to improve and i really could benefit from more variation.
As for the upbeat thing it was never really my intention to change the beat, just to fill it up more and achieve a larger sound.
And thanks for your feedback i really appreciate it when people are honest :D
Thanks for listening :D

[Mad]

Superb!!

Really nice song dude, I like the agressive voice of your singer, and ofcourse the awesome guitar and bass rifs. The song is written greatly, never gets boring.

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ChucksNation responds:

pretty cool, but why is it all synthetic instruments?